️redraw time️
i did a redraw of my first post in artfol!! i think it turned out alright :)
️1h 8minDec 29, 2022#cat
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I did go see your first post and yes there is a lot of progress !
The background is still kinda poor but it's not the subject, you have a floor and an ambiance so it's already okay!
The pose and dynamic are really good, but I think there is some problem in the proportion like the right back leg is strange, I think is just the curve which is "wrong" but it didn't disturb the drawing thank to the dynamic of the pose!
I really like how you manage the shadows which give a sense of relief pretty good !
Oh by the way, it could be strange, but, I wonder if you shouldn't have a part of the tails shadow on the back of the cat...
Just wondering because your light seems really behind the cat, it could be difficult and strange to do, but sometimes it's a question to think about...
I think it's a good redraw you've progressed! ^^
The background is still kinda poor but it's not the subject, you have a floor and an ambiance so it's already okay!
The pose and dynamic are really good, but I think there is some problem in the proportion like the right back leg is strange, I think is just the curve which is "wrong" but it didn't disturb the drawing thank to the dynamic of the pose!
I really like how you manage the shadows which give a sense of relief pretty good !
Oh by the way, it could be strange, but, I wonder if you shouldn't have a part of the tails shadow on the back of the cat...
Just wondering because your light seems really behind the cat, it could be difficult and strange to do, but sometimes it's a question to think about...I think it's a good redraw you've progressed! ^^
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