Webcomic Page [1] Fabian Meets DollfaceHi guys! I have been absent from posting on this platform and instagram for a little while. Life has been catching up with me. It all comes with being a grown adult I guess ;^;
Anyway, I have been working on art behind the scenes but I have concentrated more on comics than illustrations. My dream is to bring this story to life someday haha There is a scene in my personal webcomic project that has been living rent free in my head for a little while, so I took the leap, wrote it all out and then pieced it together in this comic draft here.
This is my first attempt at a digital comic
(:°з」∠) it's not fancy by any means and I am open to any feedback! Comic is read from left to right. I will be posting more practice pages as there is still more to this particular scene and I'd like to know what you guys think of it!
I appreciate you if you take the time to read it and leave a small comment if you want ^ ^
**please note some scenes will be marked NSFWMay 17, 2023
Anyway, I have been working on art behind the scenes but I have concentrated more on comics than illustrations. My dream is to bring this story to life someday haha There is a scene in my personal webcomic project that has been living rent free in my head for a little while, so I took the leap, wrote it all out and then pieced it together in this comic draft here.
This is my first attempt at a digital comic
(:°з」∠) it's not fancy by any means and I am open to any feedback! Comic is read from left to right. I will be posting more practice pages as there is still more to this particular scene and I'd like to know what you guys think of it!
I appreciate you if you take the time to read it and leave a small comment if you want ^ ^
**please note some scenes will be marked NSFWMay 17, 2023
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Comments
First of all, Fabian is so pretty 
Second, as for feedback I could maybe point out to keep an eye on panel lines. Some seem to overlap and go slightly beyond the corners which can make them look a little untidy. That being said, this makes me curious, hope to read more soon
Second, as for feedback I could maybe point out to keep an eye on panel lines. Some seem to overlap and go slightly beyond the corners which can make them look a little untidy. That being said, this makes me curious, hope to read more soon
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•For your first attempt this came out pretty well done! Really hope I can get to see more of this story and your work, keep up the practice and you'll get there 
(also Happy Birthday 
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(also Happy Birthday )•
•Ooohh it looks so good! I really love the panelling! 
I also love the 1920s aesthetic and Fabian's smirk is 
The only feedback I will say is that the text bubbles are a little too big and they get off panel frequently. It's hard to explain what I mean, I just find that very distracting and I get confused with the order (or maybe it's because I read too much manga) but otherwise, it looks really great!!
Also, Happy Birthday
I also love the 1920s aesthetic and Fabian's smirk is The only feedback I will say is that the text bubbles are a little too big and they get off panel frequently. It's hard to explain what I mean, I just find that very distracting and I get confused with the order (or maybe it's because I read too much manga) but otherwise, it looks really great!!Also, Happy Birthday
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•This looks neat! I'm gonna sound super straight-forward but if you need assistance pumping out pages, I'm up for it :)
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•Oh my goodness me, I just opened the app and I'm already so hooked?!
The art is gorgeous (Mostly Fabian though
) the composition is perfect, the text is clear + easy to read and the vibes is just chefs kiss 
beautiful ♡
Amazing work girl! I'm so glad you decided to bring this to life because just know I'm definitely going to be sharing the juice out of every single page of this comic !
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The art is gorgeous (Mostly Fabian though
) the composition is perfect, the text is clear + easy to read and the vibes is just chefs kiss beautiful ♡Amazing work girl! I'm so glad you decided to bring this to life because just know I'm definitely going to be sharing the juice out of every single page of this comic !
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