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Since I am completely new to drawing comics, I would like to ask you how exactly you understood this page
Jul 29, 2022
Since I am completely new to drawing comics, I would like to ask you how exactly you understood this pageJul 29, 2022#comocs
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It's good, just some things i think would make it easier to understand:
1. The dialog "Do you have hot chocolate?" Could be more inside the second panel, as appear to be supposed to happen at the same time.
When i first read this page i thought it happened in the third panel.
2. In the first panel i don't know if he's resting or sad, maybe adding a bit more surprise to him in the second panel would make it easier to understand.
That's it, good luck with the comic
1. The dialog "Do you have hot chocolate?" Could be more inside the second panel, as appear to be supposed to happen at the same time.
When i first read this page i thought it happened in the third panel.
2. In the first panel i don't know if he's resting or sad, maybe adding a bit more surprise to him in the second panel would make it easier to understand.
That's it, good luck with the comic
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