GURO/GORE ART
Looking for Critique!My professor said that my old one can be pushed further in terms of pose and balance and so after a couple weeks since I decided to give it a shot again to see if I could improve on it! I’m still struggling with it tho and I wanted to hear people’s thoughts on it.Apr 26, 2021
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Both look amazing! The second one defines the position of the limbs a lot more clearly for me, but the first one has a clearer line of action. Maybe it would improve the dynamics if the tail followed the direction of the spine in the second picture? I am by no means an expert, but it might work!
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•Hi! I really like this! But I think the silhouette of the body in the first version worked better. The face and arms are clearer in the second version, though! So, if I were you I would probably try to combine the lower body of the older version with the upper body and face of the new version, if it makes sense haha I hope this can help you, and btw I really like both of these sketches! 
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•Yes, the new one is definately better at many points, but remember not to loose the silhouette (I think it was more clear on the 1. one). You have got better details on the left one like hands, hooves or a tail. Nice try!
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