Drawing of my hand on toned grey paper

Used my own hand as a reference, what do you think? I’m really excited to be on artfol!!Oct 10, 2020

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Comments

er33

4yr

First, don't be shy, post it from normal angle. Hand, very difficult topic. Something seems to be wrong with the proportions. Wrist area might be a bit to wide in correlance to the rest. Palm : fingers ratio is about 1:1 and your intention to make palm a bit longer from this side is correct. Although a bit to much. A bit. Thumb feels too slender at the base. Great render but these intense highlights tend to make an immpresion that fingers are covered in some oiled dust or thin oil liquid layer. Which is fine in a sketch if you want to flex your ability to render light but in terms of proper natural perception my brain starts to interpret it the way I wrote earlier. Despite that very good attempt and practice. Keep making these. I hope I didn't offend you. Soon I will ask you for similar feedback on my new pieces. Rooting for you ;)

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