Space buns
I feel like the drawing overall looks really flat and ordinary. Critique to improve it would be appreciatedFeb 19, 2023#portrait
#digitalart
#painting
#semirealism
#girl
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I'd say this looks amazing! Maybe deepen the shadows a bit and add shadows behind her so the character fits better with the background. Just the little details, but other than that it looks AMAZING 
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It doesn’t look very flat but are you talking about her expression? Her smile doesn’t reach her eyes, the eyes and eyebrows look very neutral which kind of cancels out the smile.
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Not flat. I think this look great. Very well done. But I would push it just a bit farther, like more sparkles in the hair and give the chest bone area (don’t know the tech word did it lol) more of a finish. Right now the bones are sticking out. The face is gorgeous!
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It does not look flat, the volumes are well described. And it does not look ordinary, it is not ordinary seeing drawings with two coloured light sources. Maybe you can try intoducing darker shadows to increse the contrast. You did not draw projected shadows on the background. Also maybe it looks ordinary to you because the background is blank, the subject has no clothes, no tattos, no marks, and has a subtle quite neutral facial expression, standard beauty fearures, neutral pose (most of it not visible). The hair is more characterised than the rest.
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maybe make it sparklier!!! brighter highlights on the face + hair might look cool, maybe some glitter if thats your thing. but i think it looks great as is!!!
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