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|| Serein "The apprentice" ||
Yesterday I made a new outfit for Serein (my the arcana oc) and honestly I love it 
Any suggestion or thoughts about the outfit?Jul 7, 2021
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Wow! I love it!! My only suggestion is to brighten either the background color or the colors of the character. The outfit looks really well done and makes a lot of sense.
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I love the outfit, it's so unique and creative! All I have to say is that the pose--especially with the hands and arms--looks a little stiff.
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The colors and design of this piece are gorgeous. It reads very well on the clothing and the face. The only criticism I have is that the line weight is significantly heavier right around the shoulders and then proceeds to thin out on the clothing and around the face. Variation is good but this makes it feel really chunky and heavy around that area.
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Looks fantastic, outfit looks great! The only thing I'd suggest is possibly more shadow on the outfit so showcase the layers of fold. Just abit, not too much.
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I really love the different prints and details you put into the outfit,, the more I look at it the more I notice! The color scheme is also amazing and how you consistently used only a few colors gives it a really cool affect!
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I love the yellow and teal together! My only possible critique is that there is a lot of stuff happening around the neck area with her hair ending, four necklaces, two shirts, earrings, and a pattern which makes it kind of distract from the rest of the design. This though does kinda look cool anyways, so you could 100% keep it as is and it would still be amazing.
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The character design is so unique. The colors blend so well together and the turquoise definitely makes the character pop more. 
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It looks absolutely stunning! The color palette and design is amazing and so cohesive! The only thing I would adjust is the design on the skirt looks a little wonky? I would either make it bigger if possible or darken the color of the pattern to add some contrast
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Just stunning! I love the intricate detail of the outfit with all the sun motifs and the texture of the skirt!! Everything is beautiful 
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Wow this is amazing!! 
Suggestion for the outfit : the skirt part has almost no contrast . I'd say to darken the brown scarf on her waist to create more contrast in that area, close to the value of the undershirt.
Suggestion for the outfit : the skirt part has almost no contrast . I'd say to darken the brown scarf on her waist to create more contrast in that area, close to the value of the undershirt.
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This looks fire!!!! I love the colours and the design so much! One thing I wanna say is that her left shoulder is higher than the right but the hands are meeting at the same placement. Lifting her left hand a bit will show more that sheβs lifting her shoulder a bit! Great job!!!!!
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Omg she is amazing! I love her outfit, and her hair cut. Itβs very cool, and it smells like freedom to me
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She has mad Esmeralda energy and I'm here for it! The different patterns, textures and line weights are also a feast for the eyes. The freckles are cute :3
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Beautiful colours and details 
wow could immediately tell this was an arcana character. itβs very in style and the outfit is just beautifully thought out. my favorite detail is how the baggie goes over the slit in her skirt, which adds some depth and makes a clearer more recognisable silhouette. as for critique iβd suggest play around w drastic values more. youβve got a great variation of color but it would be nice to have at least one color that really pops out w brightness OR a color that darkens the piece the give more contrast. other than that this is srsly good character design! unique and again the silhouette feels recognisable. (also if u wanna check values while planning colors for ur pieces just make a new layer filled w white completely and put the filter on Color). great work
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The outfit is ABSOLUTELY gorgeous β‘ I am so happy to see The Arcana related art 
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It's lovely! I like the balance of all the little details. My only critique would be the pattern on her skirt: I think there should be just a little more contrast to the colors. I think the subtle looks of it works well, but I almost didn't notice it at all.
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I love it! The little details are great and you have such clean lines... A pleasure to look at. Maybe with brighter colours or some highlights you can make some of the lovely details more visible?
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Absolutely stunning; it has a lot of different elements but it doesn't look over detailed, in fact it very pleasing to look at
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the outfit is really cool!! usually a lot of different patterns can come off as crowded/overwhelming or something like that but thats not the case here at all, just really pretty!!! the colours are very beautiful too! <3
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