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First time doing lineart and coloring

So usually I only use a normal pencil, but I tried do a lineart and coloring this draw in traditional

What can I improve and how?
May 11, 2021
#traditional
#draw
#boy
#guys
#askingforcritique
Comments
The color and shading are really good, nice contrast and appealing to look at. There is room for improvement on the hands though. Specifically where the hands are being held. All I can say right now is that the hand of the boy in the blue hood looks like a left hand on the right arm. Thumbs usually point towards the body. I would suggest looking at a reference photo. This is still a nice drawing with a clear story, there is mainly work to be done on hands 🙌. I hope this helps you.