ToymakerHeres a tiny wip of a new character coming to idv :D
Im not sure what but something feels a bit off; any critique is welcomed!Apr 21, 2021
Im not sure what but something feels a bit off; any critique is welcomed!Apr 21, 2021
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Oh this is so good! The hands are absolutely wonderful.
For suggestions, maybe map out the perspective? Most apps have a perspective tool of some sort and that would probably make the space feel a lot more 3D and a tad less wonky. Also, maybe try rounding out the front part of her face a bit, pushing out the nose area, that sort of thing. It looks a teensy bit flat. Otherwise, super cool!
For suggestions, maybe map out the perspective? Most apps have a perspective tool of some sort and that would probably make the space feel a lot more 3D and a tad less wonky. Also, maybe try rounding out the front part of her face a bit, pushing out the nose area, that sort of thing. It looks a teensy bit flat. Otherwise, super cool!
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•very nice composition! I love the warm light coming in through the window but I feel like there could be more bounce light? just a soft gradient on an layer mode could brighten up the whole room since the light coming in is quite strong. Like when you pull the blinds up and immediately the whole room is filled with the light from the window. Sorry if that made no sense? also the way you draw hands is phenomenal, what witchcraft is this-
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•I like this!! It looks really nice!
To me, it kind of looks like she's a little off balance compared to what she's sitting on. Like either she's leaning too far to her right, or the angle of what she's sitting on is too high towards the back (away from us).
I could be wrong, but that's what it feels like to me.
To me, it kind of looks like she's a little off balance compared to what she's sitting on. Like either she's leaning too far to her right, or the angle of what she's sitting on is too high towards the back (away from us).
I could be wrong, but that's what it feels like to me.
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•I love this composition. Great storytelling. I think the left side (section from window) can be a little brighter, also make the right bottom side darker. I think you just need light and shade to create more dimension to this piece. 
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•Oh you need to give shade to the side of her face to make it look dimensional. Maybe a few drops or line of bright color in her eye will make her face pop.
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•So cute!!! I don’t know, this may just be me, but her forehead feels a little flat? The little doll she is holding, everything about this pose makes my heart melt 
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