The Showgirl
This is my first poster edit here. Please give constructive reviews as to how I can improve :)Jan 30, 2021#jihyeon
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Hi so uh as it says you are asking for constructive criticism I hope you don't mind me giving some...( I am so bad myself lmao ). So tbh this edit looks really good the colors are to the point and I really love them. The detailing on the girl is pretty awesome ( especially the tears) one thing I found a little irking is the background...it sort of feels out of the place compared to the model and her position on the pole...if you get it. Also the blood(??) on her knees doesn't blend well so maybe to make it look more real you can use opacity and highlights ( also there are a lot of great blood tutorials on Instagram). And lastly the typography...I really love how it blends and the color scheme off it but you can always go for better fonts, maybe try and explore fonts on dafont. ( also you can take typography inspiration from deviantart).
Great work!!
Great work!!
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