Sucrose, from genshin impact 
Love her very much 
Apr 24, 2021
Love her very much Apr 24, 2021#genshinimpact
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#sucrose
Comments
Very cute! I like the flat colours you’re going with. I think you can push the contrast a bit more since everything is pretty saturated as bright, you miss out on what the focus of the picture is.
I think to help with that is decide what your focus is, I’d say it’s be the face with the yellow flowers, to push that you can brighten that area and kind of blur and desaturate the other flowers around
There also doesn’t seem to be a clear light source, I can see there’s some light coming from the right bu try pushing it a bit more and adding shadows ( cool shadows since it seems this is day time)
if you’re going for a flat and graphic look then you can utilize a better silhouette ( a better silhoette is hooked either way regardless of if you’re going for more painterly or more flat). Try flatting your character in all black and see if you can still understand what’s happening and who the character is, if not then try seeing how you can make the pose and action read more clearly
I think to help with that is decide what your focus is, I’d say it’s be the face with the yellow flowers, to push that you can brighten that area and kind of blur and desaturate the other flowers around
There also doesn’t seem to be a clear light source, I can see there’s some light coming from the right bu try pushing it a bit more and adding shadows ( cool shadows since it seems this is day time)
if you’re going for a flat and graphic look then you can utilize a better silhouette ( a better silhoette is hooked either way regardless of if you’re going for more painterly or more flat). Try flatting your character in all black and see if you can still understand what’s happening and who the character is, if not then try seeing how you can make the pose and action read more clearly
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