Donaverbo.art DTIYS on InstaIn the DTIYS mood recently 
tried a couple new things with this drawing as far as rendering goes, I had fun with it!Feb 10, 2021
tried a couple new things with this drawing as far as rendering goes, I had fun with it!Feb 10, 2021
#digitalillustration
#firealpaca
#portrait
Comments
Since you asked for critique I can say :
- you should work on the anatomy of your character / construction like here, her clavicles are waaaay too rotated. The sternum cavity should be higher and the clavicles should be almost right/straight.
- if you modify this point, then you should re-up her chest a little and make a better distinction between her breast and her ribbs (here it's too soft). Speaking of her breasts, just watch some references but you'll see that the zone between the breasts is (almost everytime) lighter the the zones around ~
- the colors are amazing (seriously, it's warm and soft at the same time and you mixed them well, good job) but sometimes you need to "define" it more (like between elements to detach them : the shoulder + top / the jacket. The biggest blurry part is the zone between her breasts, her ribs and the jacket).
- I can finally add that her nose should be seen a little more from 3/4..
Anyway, great job, I love the vibe ~
- you should work on the anatomy of your character / construction like here, her clavicles are waaaay too rotated. The sternum cavity should be higher and the clavicles should be almost right/straight.
- if you modify this point, then you should re-up her chest a little and make a better distinction between her breast and her ribbs (here it's too soft). Speaking of her breasts, just watch some references but you'll see that the zone between the breasts is (almost everytime) lighter the the zones around ~
- the colors are amazing (seriously, it's warm and soft at the same time and you mixed them well, good job) but sometimes you need to "define" it more (like between elements to detach them : the shoulder + top / the jacket. The biggest blurry part is the zone between her breasts, her ribs and the jacket).
- I can finally add that her nose should be seen a little more from 3/4..
Anyway, great job, I love the vibe ~
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