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My CharBeautiful char of mine living in 200000.
Rough sketch ✍️
But I like it~

Light injury badly drawn so I didn’t think it needs censured! Unless . . . 🫵😔

IM PUTING IT IN CRITIQUE cuz I’m bad at bodies when drawing on my tablet. Give me some advice plzzzzzz~
Jan 21, 2023
Comments
Fix proportions and posture. I like the colouring and idea! 😄
Your body shapes aren’t bad.

I think the heads are a little too long and the one on the right is way too big. Also your gun seems very static and 2d compared to the dynamic pose. I would recommend looking at the coil foreshortening method and studying how people hold guns.
I can see it looks like she has no ribs and her body is a flexy rectangle. 🥲