WIP
☆ I'm working on @melonzest's dtiys, does anyone have any critique for me? Especially with the wings, I'm not familiar with drawing them☆ Links to resources or references would also be useful :]
☆ Image: a pencil sketch of a person with large bird wings standing and making a finger gun. Their eyes are closed and they have a self-assured smile on their face. They have short, messy hair with two braids in it, and are wearing a tank top. They also have small, round feathers growing in on their neck, shoulders and cheeks. End description.Jan 20, 2022
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Comments
This looks really cool! For the wings my man thing is how I can't really see where the primaries are on the left wing. Those feathers don't turn in but yours do so it looks like they aren't there. Making those longer would be a good idea as well. Adding more layers would also be a good idea - wings are only slim in the lower layers. The rest of your anatomy is awesome tho! And I love the facial expression!
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•Ah this looks great so far! I wish I had a specific type of bird I used for reference with the wings, but unfortunately I just kinda made stuff up as I went. If you’re having trouble I would recommend googling general bird wing anatomy, it definitely helps when trying to piece everything together! <3
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