My OC Journey

Meet Journey, the younger sister of my other OC Pandora! I'll create a reference sheet for her later
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I'll post Pandora a bit later, because all I have for her are outdated drawings
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I did a ctiys on my Instagram page with the lineart for this particular drawing! Go ahead and hop onto my account if you're interested in joining!
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So I tried to make her as majestic as possible (as in adding in all those small details) because this was originally my entry piece for Clip Studio's #galaxyscutest contest. Buttttt I passed the deadline . So instead, I'd like to ask for some critique for this drawing so I know where and how to improve if I ever join another contest of theirs again. I don't have a specific topic in mind, so anything will do! I appreciate it!