

aye aye captain
hi y'all this is the first time i am asking for critiques pls keep your comments in a nice matter

i am aware that the background is not really good so tips on that would be great!
if there is anything else yall think would improve my art please write those too
Feb 21, 2021#oc
#digital
#originalcharacter
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I absolutely love the lighting
and the background is really good, but if there was a light or shadow effect on the background too it would be way more realistic 


and the background is really good, but if there was a light or shadow effect on the background too it would be way more realistic 


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The character is really cute! I really like the style and the gradient in her hair!
I think, one thing that might need improving for next time might be the arm placement? With her holding the sword, I can imagine it being uncomfortable having them straight, so maybe have the elbows bent a bit more and the wrists will be a bit more natural looking.
Overall though, I do like her design! Keep it up
I think, one thing that might need improving for next time might be the arm placement? With her holding the sword, I can imagine it being uncomfortable having them straight, so maybe have the elbows bent a bit more and the wrists will be a bit more natural looking.
Overall though, I do like her design! Keep it up

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•I mean you already know that but you should practice more on your backgrounds. It still looks so nice tho
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