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Artsy Jozie DTIYS Entry

(this is for a DTIYS by @/artsy.jozie on IG)

I usually struggle with dynamic poses so I challenged myself to try one with this drawing, but I think her pose turned out very stiff -- does anyone have any tips on making poses look more natural?

I'm overall pretty happy with this drawing though.

ใ€ ๐•”๐• ๐•ž๐•ž๐•–๐•Ÿ๐•ฅ๐•ค ๐•’๐•Ÿ๐•• ๐•”๐•ฃ๐•š๐•ฅ๐•š๐•ข๐•ฆ๐•– ๐•ฃ๐•–๐•’๐•๐•๐•ช ๐•’๐•ก๐•ก๐•ฃ๐•–๐•”๐•š๐•’๐•ฅ๐•–๐••!! ใ€‘Aug 4, 2021
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5yr
Iโ€™d say add more detail and value to the hair to make it pop
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5yr
Overall I think you've done a great job of the drawing and the tones! But as for critique, I would agree it looks rigid. The upper limbs in particular look very straight - that arm on the left with its hand, the hand holding the fan and the head. I think a bit more expression in the face might help, and a bit more bend in the limbs (and maybe movement in the fan hand - is she fanning herself?). Hope that helps a little!
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