Practice sketch 
It's a patreon homework where an anime portrait is to be drawn. At the end it should be fully colored. I've finished the sketch so far and would start with the outlines next. But first I wanted to ask what you think. Do you notice anything that bothers you? Or is everything ok so far? :>Mar 27, 2021#sketch
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@as_knight_and_day ooooh thank you so much for your suggestions :D I will try to implement your suggestions. I have already improved some things, I will upload the clean lineart soon. I would be very happy if you could also share your thoughts on this 
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•Ooooh this is so pretty!! Overall you did a very good job, I'd only recommend changing the bow at the neck a little bit. Right now it's a little chaotic with the bow and the necklace. I'd either make the bow a bit longer or a bit shorter. And make sure to avoid tangents!! In case you don't know what those are, I'd recommend you look them up. But, these are both fairly minor points, that don't need a lot of attention right now, but they are things to look out for. Other than that, it's a very lovely piece!! I can't wait to see the finished product :)
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