Fireflies 
I posted this on my Instagram but I just don’t love it. I feel like there’s something misplaced about it and I thought I’d ask for some critique! Let me know what your thoughts are 
is there anything you would change or do differently? May 6, 2021
I posted this on my Instagram but I just don’t love it. I feel like there’s something misplaced about it and I thought I’d ask for some critique! Let me know what your thoughts are is there anything you would change or do differently? May 6, 2021#mermaid
#mermay
#procreate
#nymph
Comments
i really like this, the colours are so nice
i think the "knee" of the tail poking out of the frame at the bottom is a bit off-putting for me, i'd love to see more lily pads sticking out of frame instead, or the end of the tail but the knee feels a bit awkward. so nice tho!
i think the "knee" of the tail poking out of the frame at the bottom is a bit off-putting for me, i'd love to see more lily pads sticking out of frame instead, or the end of the tail but the knee feels a bit awkward. so nice tho!•
•Well the drawing and the colours are stunning 
, maybe the lower part is a little confusing, at first I thought It was a numb leg (i wish i could draw like that though)
, maybe the lower part is a little confusing, at first I thought It was a numb leg (i wish i could draw like that though)•
Wow, looks great :) well it’s definitely not the colors cause they look wonderful. Maybe it’s the pose. I guess there’s something about her going in and out of the water and in and out of the border that kind of clashes.
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this color palette is so cool.