Rawenclaw 
Horns
I tried some new style , how do you think I can improve it ,maybe add something?Style for sketches..Apr 19, 2021
#oc
#originalcharacter
#girl
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I really like this! One thing you can do in any piece is to focus on the silhouette of your subject/character.
Basically you can ask yourself, if I completely fill in the entire subject the same colour as the lines, how well does the shape 'read?'
So for example, if her left arm was a little further forward so that there was space between it and her stomach/abs, the silhouette would have more clarity because there would be a clear distinction between her arm and the rest of her body, just based on the shape of the character.
It's just a little trick that helps add interest to artwork and helps viewers understand more quickly what's going on (don't get the wrong idea; I can see the arm there anyways, it's clear that it's an arm
).
Hope that helps!!
Basically you can ask yourself, if I completely fill in the entire subject the same colour as the lines, how well does the shape 'read?'
So for example, if her left arm was a little further forward so that there was space between it and her stomach/abs, the silhouette would have more clarity because there would be a clear distinction between her arm and the rest of her body, just based on the shape of the character.
It's just a little trick that helps add interest to artwork and helps viewers understand more quickly what's going on (don't get the wrong idea; I can see the arm there anyways, it's clear that it's an arm
).Hope that helps!!
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•Maybe change the black shadow to the same color than the line, but it's quibbling, I find it very beautiful 
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