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I tried writing a bit. This is based off something I decided to try and write a few days ago. It is meant to serve as a sort of prologue for my fantasy story. It's not done. Any advice is welcome! :D


A long, long time ago, the world was born of nothing.

Before mankind walked the ground, before any living creature had breathed the breath of life, there lived nothing. The world was not empty, but instead, was held together with something indescribable, something that held more power than any could imagine. The world itself breathed, and with every breath, it shifted ever so slightly. Eventually, the world would spin, creating time as we know it. It was this that brought the world’s first creatures, which we could only describe as deities. Magnificent beings who roamed for a long, long time before we ever did.

And among them, was De’Yaire. De’Yaire was amongst the most powerful spirits. He was a serpent, built of green magic, and as such he had a very leafy appearance. Leaves sprouted out from his scales. During times of celebration, he would allow the petals of the world’s most colorful petals to bloom instead. De’Yaire had great faith in mankind. He viewed us as gifts, and could see the visions of years far, far away, where we rise to the greatest of heights.
Oct 10, 2024
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Seems like pretty solid introduction! I hope you keep building off of this :)