krul tepes!!
hey, so i wanted to try a more semi realistic (? style and this is kinda the first drawing i do like that, so please tell me what do you think about it :) any critiques are welcome, ty!Apr 8, 2021Comments
Thanks for the like! Thought I'd come and contribute hehe. Firstly, love that colour scheme. Matches the character bloody well(see what I did there??) But one criticism would be that when you look at it, it's too messy. Cleaning up the lines will help a lot in this situation to make the art look more prominent. Also, one thing I noticed is that her eyes stand out. This is a good thing since that's the first thing you see and then go to explore the rest of the art. This is mostly coz you've cleaned up the iris giving the character visual impact. Now, if you wanted the first thing to be seen is the blood, then you'd need to clean the lines up so that when we first look at the piece, we automatically know that this is a bloody character e.g vampire or villain. Hope that's not too long. Also for a first try at semi realism, that's dope.
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@elvelykter aaa ty!! about the lines, yeah i will clean them in my next drawings, it's just that this was kinda practice so it's more like i doodle(? anyways, thank you for your opinion! 
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Ahhh you made really cute!! And the color palette 
As for critique, maybe it would look nice if you cleaned up the lines a bit?
As for critique, maybe it would look nice if you cleaned up the lines a bit?•
