Dead WIP

I have been going through WIP and struggling to revive pieces.Dec 22, 2023

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Comments

evymetal

2yr

Great movement and strong, dynamic linework, love the wrinkling in the sleeve and hip. More wrinkling! I do think proportionally you could make their face a bit bigger and slightly higher, giving more chin and jaw. The line on the far side of the collar should be intersecting lower to give the suggestion of it wrapping around the back of their neck, rn it looks popped but only on one side. Their left index finger gets a little lost in the crumpled paper. Really nice ♡

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@silentsongs

United States

I am a illustrator working on my first comic.