Persona art again
THIS IS SO PRETTY AHHHHHH!! I'm also looking for some criticism!! Any way I can improve? I kinda think the glasses look off but I'm not sure why ^^;Sep 17, 2023#persona
#criticism
#personaoc
#cozy
#warm
Comments
Your art and lighting looks very soft & warm :> i think you could use some overlay layers to deepen shadows (hair behind a neck, face under the bangs/ eyes), because while the glow is nice, shadows would add more depth to character. As wearer of glasses, i could also say that the top frame of the glasses would be visible even with puffy hair, because they don't lay super close to the face :)
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•Oh my god I thought I commented earlier but artfol simply Did Not Post It ig??? Jfc
ANYWAY I love this sm and the glasses look GREAT dw abt those!!
The ONLY thing I could possibly point out is that the head is a little off center from the neck?? Like too far to the right. If I were drawing this I'd have it be more centered even if the face is turned that direction. HOWEVER it 100% could be an art style thing and it still works for sure, so don't take that too seriously lol.
Looks awesome overall, love the coloring style !!! V cute :D
ANYWAY I love this sm and the glasses look GREAT dw abt those!!
The ONLY thing I could possibly point out is that the head is a little off center from the neck?? Like too far to the right. If I were drawing this I'd have it be more centered even if the face is turned that direction. HOWEVER it 100% could be an art style thing and it still works for sure, so don't take that too seriously lol.
Looks awesome overall, love the coloring style !!! V cute :D
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•I think it looks good and improvement from your old art (not that your old art I saw was ever bad but like just that you can tell you're getting better) I was going to comment but I didn't recognize you after the username change so I was like 
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