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A comic I did for a fanzine a while ago. My take on Percy's life and perspective after the fall of Ministry.I would love to know if you like the story, the use of panels, everything.Jan 10, 2021
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Comments
I really like it!! It's so cool how you managed to draw the statues so well with just black and white! And I really like Percy and Arthur's expressions too! Maybe what you could improve is the perspective behind the fountain? Just because it's not very clear how the space behind it is supposed to look like, I'm guessing it's a circular space, but the perspective looks a bit weird when you compare it to the fountain. Another thing is that the little paper plane next to Percy's face isn't very visible, I didn't notice it at first. Maybe with a bit more contrast on the values or changing a bit the position you can fix it!
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