, critique is appreciated.
[She/They]
WIPSo i lined it with a pen… the pen kept running out of ink mid-line even though it’s brand new and it looks like a 3 year old did it.. also i added some hints of color, i’m thinking i might finish coloring it. any critique??Jun 12, 2021
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love the drawing!
Okay so critique wise, I'd say it could use some work with the perspective. Particularly with the shoulder and horn (both on the side closest to the veiwer)
the shoulder is thrown a tad too far foreward for the character's position, and the horn seems like a replica of the other horn. Horns such as those turn slightly inwards and tend to point back towards the character's head. meaning in this perspective, the tip would not be turned towards the veiwer and the tip would not be quite as visible.
uhh other than that looks pretty cool! you did a good job with the clothing folds too!
Okay so critique wise, I'd say it could use some work with the perspective. Particularly with the shoulder and horn (both on the side closest to the veiwer)
the shoulder is thrown a tad too far foreward for the character's position, and the horn seems like a replica of the other horn. Horns such as those turn slightly inwards and tend to point back towards the character's head. meaning in this perspective, the tip would not be turned towards the veiwer and the tip would not be quite as visible.
uhh other than that looks pretty cool! you did a good job with the clothing folds too!
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