FlyingSometimes I just wanna be a bird and fly away 
working on a new piece and if I can get some help for the composition that’d be great thanks!!Aug 5, 2024
working on a new piece and if I can get some help for the composition that’d be great thanks!!Aug 5, 2024#wings
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Omg I love the colour contrast of the sky
And the characters are so expressive!!
What I like to do when doing composition is focusing on what you will see when you first lay eyes on your painting. For this, I'd see the guy on the left first, but my eyes will wander back and forth from the right girl, and lastly seeing the smallest one. I find it a bit confusing. I think to create a nice flow, the guy needs to be bigger in the screen or the girl on the right smaller, so they dont 'compete'. And the smallest one could maybe be farther from the guy so there will be a more deliberate placement of open space around that focal point, if that's what you like.
Apologies if it's a bit confusing
I quite like this piece actually.
And the characters are so expressive!!What I like to do when doing composition is focusing on what you will see when you first lay eyes on your painting. For this, I'd see the guy on the left first, but my eyes will wander back and forth from the right girl, and lastly seeing the smallest one. I find it a bit confusing. I think to create a nice flow, the guy needs to be bigger in the screen or the girl on the right smaller, so they dont 'compete'. And the smallest one could maybe be farther from the guy so there will be a more deliberate placement of open space around that focal point, if that's what you like.
Apologies if it's a bit confusing
I quite like this piece actually.•
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