

Line art of my first oc kinda,,,,,,^hi
Hihi hi helloThis was a few days ago so id like scathing insults about it obviously.Nov 27, 2021
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Are the fists supposed to be 2 different sizes? The nearer one is too big, but the farther one that's screen right looks about right. She's also got a bit too much ponch on her crotch.
Her belly button wouldn't be so clearly visible through her clothes (her bodice doesn't look transparent anywhere else).
The leaf shaped bags attached to her jacket are...purses?
They're ambiguous, so I think they could use a zipper or another detail to describe them.
Her belly button wouldn't be so clearly visible through her clothes (her bodice doesn't look transparent anywhere else).
The leaf shaped bags attached to her jacket are...purses?
They're ambiguous, so I think they could use a zipper or another detail to describe them.•















