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how could this drawing have been made better?

there is no air in it know it.. but why? and what else..?Dec 8, 2023
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it’s really pretty!! i love the characters and the thing in the middle (no idea what it’s called but it looks very cool!!)
the drawing as a whole looks a bit plain though, especially the upper middle is very empty.
maybe you could try to make the lighting pop more, perhaps use bolder colors for that? maybe in general, to add more contrast here, make the shadows darker and the lighting lighter
but im not quite sure, it honestly depends on the atmosphere you were going for. this looks very peaceful but i’d probably sprinkle a bit more colors into it, but that’s really just my personal style haha