Inktober Day 10 Hope

Can some one critique on my hatching? It's kind of messy I know, but like I'm not really sure how this shiz supposed to go. Anyway, please enjoy my sad art even tho it's supposed to be about hope!! And yes, my art style is [REDACTED]!!!!

HAVE A GREAT DAY!Oct 11, 2020

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