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Moonlight lake
Hey everyone! This is my first post in this community, i would appericiate some feedback on my composition, art style, aesthetics - anything you can critique me on is much appreciated
This is my 2nd lanscape try and i find it very displeasing to the eye but i cannot figure out what those art mistakes it could be :,(
Please let me know in the comments xDApr 16, 2021
Comments
Hey this is great!
Night scenes can be tricky. What is important to remember is that your sky color affect all your objects in the scene. Right now your sky is gray. The water is only a mirror and reflects the sky. So your water should be the same color as your sky. Hope this helps! Keep it up!
Night scenes can be tricky. What is important to remember is that your sky color affect all your objects in the scene. Right now your sky is gray. The water is only a mirror and reflects the sky. So your water should be the same color as your sky. Hope this helps! Keep it up!
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i love the colours! they compliment the overall piece very well. i have two suggestions, 1. for the lamp, it doesn’t seem super apparent that light is coming from it and how it affects the lighting of its surroundings, and 2. trees can be tricky to draw, i think you could improve the overall look of the tree by adding more branches (take some time to look up lots of reference photos of the specie of tree you’re trying to emulate!) and perhaps spacing out the area the leaves cover. hope this helps!
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aaa this is so pretty!
an advice i’d give is to play with more colors :D try adding random splashes of contrasting colors for shadows and highlights <3
an advice i’d give is to play with more colors :D try adding random splashes of contrasting colors for shadows and highlights <3
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It is great!
I this you could lower the second line of trees in the gackgroung lower that the leaves so that is easier to read the atmospheric perspective.
I this you could lower the second line of trees in the gackgroung lower that the leaves so that is easier to read the atmospheric perspective.
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