Bakudeku
I want to improve Bakugo, the blond, a bit more because I feel like he doesnt match the rest of the drawing. Please offer your best critique so that I can fix him.Mar 25, 2021Comments
Ok so first this piece is a good foundation, so if you want to improved it a little maybe add a Light source. A Light source can help you see the shading better and maybe determine different face features better as well. Bakugou's face should have the nose extend out a bit more even though it is against deku's face and the mouth would come out a bit as well. If you need, there is always references on pinterest and Google. Personally it helps me alot. I am a bakudeku shipper so ahhh i really like this idea. Really hope i helped, and i hope i dont sound too strong and stuff 
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Hm.. maybe some more contrast. Shadows aren't always soft even if it's a style choice, a lil cell shading will help to make everything a bit more clear.
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•Ok so its a nice piece over all, though i dont rlly get where is the blonde guy's lips and stuff, where is the green person's other hand and i recommend lining your artwork with a light brown color and make the shadings darker. Hope i helped!!
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