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My final assignment for my writing class is to write about an event a tree has witnessed, so I wrote mine about a tree that witnesses a murder
just got my feedback for the first draft, my teacher wrote ‘What a cool tree! And equally cool tree!’ and im like

Thanks but what does that mean
May 3, 2021
#writing
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The trees watching me get murdered:

B)👉👉 👈👈(.¶
(The right one has an eye patch or no reason other than being cool tree)

Also I think your teacher might be a big fan of the song Murders by https://youtu.be/CaTX0pt3uyg them (yeh ik, but it wouldn't let me copy paste their name so I had to improvise)
heres the first draft if anyone wants to see:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CUISErXGyByz9mSPQX-NjapW3XdTYDcbQom0zmP-6UE/edit
tw for lots of gore tho lol
it’s cool to witness murder???