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Commission for Yeeona!
May 14, 2021#original
#character
#demon
Comments
Beautiful!! I love the contrast of color, and she’s gorgeously striking, perfect pose! 
Critique: I would modify is to clean the lines of the blue robe and the gold ribbon a little more, and perhaps think about establishing a clearer source of light, right now it’s almost impossible to tell where the light source is! The lifted arm/shoulder’s anatomy is incorrect, try to find a photo reference or a muscle chart (the deltoid wraps over the bicep). Hairline under the ear is a little unclear/strange, and the robe’s fabric is shaded the same as the hair, even though they don’t share the same texture.
Critique: I would modify is to clean the lines of the blue robe and the gold ribbon a little more, and perhaps think about establishing a clearer source of light, right now it’s almost impossible to tell where the light source is! The lifted arm/shoulder’s anatomy is incorrect, try to find a photo reference or a muscle chart (the deltoid wraps over the bicep). Hairline under the ear is a little unclear/strange, and the robe’s fabric is shaded the same as the hair, even though they don’t share the same texture.•
