my webtoon that I'm starting to make
feel free to critiqueOct 20, 2023Comments
Oooh, nice! My one critique is to make the words bigger! Try to have it so there's 3-4 words per line. For example:
"Gynomei, may I
come in please?"
"Yes Yin, I was
about to send a
search party out
for you!"
There are exception where you can have more or less. But making it bigger and breaking it up improves readability.
"Gynomei, may I
come in please?"
"Yes Yin, I was
about to send a
search party out
for you!"
There are exception where you can have more or less. But making it bigger and breaking it up improves readability.
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well actually it was going to be about gyomei from Demon slayer one of my girl OCS like they fight demons and fall in love but I think I have to ask before I use gyomei idk
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