๐โ๐๐ ๐ถ๐๐น ๐๐ผ๐๐Redraw from April 24th (?) If you guys followed my old account in April or May you may remember the original art
Bruh the original was so ugly wtf
One thing I remember about the original though is that I enabled critique
So I decided to do that here, too :) and yeah Iโm already aware that the elbows look weird but I was too lazy to fix it geh
Itโs so cool to see the improvement :0
I still have much to improve on, but I think Iโm doing okay! I tried out smooth lines and it looks weird but yeahโฆMelanie Martinez fanartโฆ her music has inspired me a lot, sheโs very talented. Thatโs why I wanted to do this redraw. โ Credits to Melanie Martinez for the lyrics Art belongs to me Do not copy, edit, trace, use, steal, or repost my work โ Thanks for reading :)Nov 13, 2021
The colors are so pretty! Ok so one think I think you could try it making the forground stuff outlined. With your artstyle I also think making the white lace on the dress a bit larger as that is the only area with details that small and distracts from the rest of the drawing. Other than that this is really good!!! Love the composition