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๐•Šโ„๐•†๐•Ž ๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐’น ๐•‹๐”ผ๐•ƒ๐•ƒRedraw from April 24th (?)
If you guys followed my old account in April or May you may remember the original art ๐Ÿ‘โ€๐Ÿ—จ๐Ÿ‘โ€๐Ÿ—จ

Bruh the original was so ugly wtf ๐Ÿ˜ญ

One thing I remember about the original though is that I enabled critique

So I decided to do that here, too :) and yeah Iโ€™m already aware that the elbows look weird but I was too lazy to fix it geh

Itโ€™s so cool to see the improvement :0

I still have much to improve on, but I think Iโ€™m doing okay! I tried out smooth lines and it looks weird but yeahโ€ฆMelanie Martinez fanartโ€ฆ her music has inspired me a lot, sheโ€™s very talented. Thatโ€™s why I wanted to do this redraw.
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Credits to Melanie Martinez for the lyrics
Art belongs to me
Do not copy, edit, trace, use, steal, or repost my work
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Thanks for reading :)
Nov 13, 2021
#melaniemartinez
#showandtell
#fanart
#aaaaaa
#redraw
Comments
@nekoh0ney @punpkin__ @friesinabox @tansui
heโ€™s ok!! As far as I know, heโ€™s not allowed to use Artfol anymore. He is on Pinterest tho!
@/chicken_king
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Is everything ok?? You've been gone for a while
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Where are youuuuuuuu D:
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Are you ok? Its been a bit
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You havenโ€™t been online in a monthโ€ฆ are you okay?
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This looks so good like the details are just a m a z i n g .
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Her hair the pose Aah I love her!
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bro i love this ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—
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KDJXHRKSBCJF ITS AMAZING- [I would kinda suggest the legs closer together and the skirt of the dress a bit less wide-]
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THIS IS SO COOL
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'0' I DIDN'T KNOW YOU KNOW MELANIE MARTINEZ- SHE LOOKS AMAZING IN YOUR STYLE๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–
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I like the color pallette,It's so cool!
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IT LOOKS AMAZING AAAAAAAโ€”
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OWOAOAOWOAOAOOAOA THIS IS AMAZING CHICKEN LIKE WHAT THE HECK AHAHAHAHAHAHHAH
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The colors are so pretty! Ok so one think I think you could try it making the forground stuff outlined. With your artstyle I also think making the white lace on the dress a bit larger as that is the only area with details that small and distracts from the rest of the drawing. Other than that this is really good!!! Love the composition
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Ahhh, Artfol finally loaded and let me see this. Itโ€™s super cool! I really enjoy her music and her style
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If I had to say anything, the dress looks kinda flat and untextured?
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GOES INSANE IVE BEEN OBSESSED ABOUT MELANIE THE PAST WEEK AND THIS LITERALLYโ€ฆ the timing is perfect
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Ah I love how u drew the dress
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