NezukoHere’s a redraw I did of my old drawing of Nezuko!!
I hope I’ve gotten better at proportion, coloring, and composition. I’d love some feedback. Just be gentle. I’m a fragile baby. Make sure to actually be constructive lol. Here is a link to my side by side comparison.
https://twitter.com/lindz_foshizzle/status/1387210495615139843?s=21Apr 28, 2021
I hope I’ve gotten better at proportion, coloring, and composition. I’d love some feedback. Just be gentle. I’m a fragile baby. Make sure to actually be constructive lol. Here is a link to my side by side comparison.
https://twitter.com/lindz_foshizzle/status/1387210495615139843?s=21Apr 28, 2021
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Comments
Composition and general mood is very well done! The 2 main things that stick out to me here are the hands and the flames behind Nezuko. The hands should be a little bit bigger and the shift from wrist bone to arm needs to be a little more pronounced. The flames do look a little off, they’re too red and the glow effect on them isn’t really making them “glow”, it’s just kinda there. If you’re style is completely cells shading only, then maybe watch some shows like The Last Avatar and study the fire in them, to see how you can do them in a cell style. Keep up the great work!
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•It looks great! Good job 
I think maybe the hands are slightly too small. Their size is approximately as big as the face.
Anyway keep it up
I think maybe the hands are slightly too small. Their size is approximately as big as the face.
Anyway keep it up
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