Art improvement?

I redrew some art The top right girl is from February 12th 2020, the bottom right girl is from February 23rd 2021, and the girl on the left is from today, January 7th 2022. I'll add in that I used some pens and a cheap water based marker to do my newer version. I'm still not sure I like the newest version, maybe I'll redraw it again in February of this year