Abnormality dancin' girl (mv's time code 1:43)I just love this song so bad for so long (^^)
I prefer the sketch I made of it but the final result isn't so bad I think. ^^'
( Listen to the song NOW. Title : abnormality dancin' girl by Guchiry)
I want to improve more than ever so you cam critique ! (Just be kind lol)Jul 27, 2023
I prefer the sketch I made of it but the final result isn't so bad I think. ^^'
( Listen to the song NOW. Title : abnormality dancin' girl by Guchiry)
I want to improve more than ever so you cam critique ! (Just be kind lol)Jul 27, 2023
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#vocaloid
#painting
#digital
Comments
omg i love your style!!! especially the hair turned out so beautiful! the shading on it is so detail it’s lovely :0
as for critique, the shading on the face makes the nose quite hard to see, and id recommend you to look up plains of the face and study those if you wanna improve facial proportions + shading & lightning
ofc this is a very stylised face and if that’s what you want it’s not necessary to keep the proportions 100% realistic, but practicing that more definitely helps with lightning and stuff :D
also, i think the butterflies are beautiful!! just the one in the front looks very unrealistic/undetailed compared to the other ones
there’s a drastic difference in style so it might’ve been on purpose? idk, but i just think the other butterflies look really nice and it’s a bit confusing that the one in the front seems so different
also, it seems like you did the lightning with white and shading with black/grey which often makes a piece looks kinda muddy or dusty so i’d recommend using other colors
but at the end of the day it’s all just abt your personal style :D
and it’s still a beautiful piece <3
as for critique, the shading on the face makes the nose quite hard to see, and id recommend you to look up plains of the face and study those if you wanna improve facial proportions + shading & lightning
ofc this is a very stylised face and if that’s what you want it’s not necessary to keep the proportions 100% realistic, but practicing that more definitely helps with lightning and stuff :D
also, i think the butterflies are beautiful!! just the one in the front looks very unrealistic/undetailed compared to the other ones
there’s a drastic difference in style so it might’ve been on purpose? idk, but i just think the other butterflies look really nice and it’s a bit confusing that the one in the front seems so different
also, it seems like you did the lightning with white and shading with black/grey which often makes a piece looks kinda muddy or dusty so i’d recommend using other colors
but at the end of the day it’s all just abt your personal style :D
and it’s still a beautiful piece <3
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