Moving Day 1/3

This has been in my gallery for about a couple of months now, I thought its time I post it somewhere lol.

((You can view the other parts in my collection named "Comic Practice"))

I really wanna know how to improve, so to any of the people on this app who make comics or have any knowledge about it, please give any critique and/or tips I could use (⁠ ⁠；⁠∀⁠；⁠)

I'm already aware that the way I constructed the dialogues is kinda dry and fast paced sbsjsjsj I just don't know how to fix it༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ