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I did this awhile ago, but critique is always appreciated ^^Sep 16, 2020#anime
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It's super cute! 
The one thing that stood out to me was the right hand. If she's kind of in this 3/4th view (based on where her breasts and shoulders are facing) then even if her arms were facing us head-on we would still see more of the side of her hand because her torso can only bend so far. I just tried making this pose and have my torso twist one way with with my arms up facing forward, it hurts! 
So in the future I'd just match the shoulder direction with the hands haha. But again, it's adorable!
The one thing that stood out to me was the right hand. If she's kind of in this 3/4th view (based on where her breasts and shoulders are facing) then even if her arms were facing us head-on we would still see more of the side of her hand because her torso can only bend so far. I just tried making this pose and have my torso twist one way with with my arms up facing forward, it hurts! So in the future I'd just match the shoulder direction with the hands haha. But again, it's adorable!•
•cute!!! I love the colors <3 I’d probably angle the hands towards each other a little more, since it kind of hurts to hold your hands like pictured ! :0 additionally, the hand to the left should probably be bigger than the one to the right, since it looks like it is closer to the viewer
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•The coloring and shading is really nice and your linart work is really nice too! I just think the hair kinda look off since it's kinda stiff? And kinda on the air like it doesn't have gravity, Great drawing tho!
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