Finished! (Read the description please)

Well I would like some tips to improve this drawing, but I think I need to say one thing more important.

Well, there is a person stealing my art, please see the profile before supporting that person, many good people thought it was me who was posting ...
And I would also like to thank the people who reported this account, I would like to answer everyone but there are many people. But I really appreciate everyone who helped me, I really didn't know what to do If you want proof of my drawings, I'll be posting speedpaint on my tik tok account, you can access it through the link I left in my biography or just looking for my nick name. Thanks again to everyone who helped, the account of the person who is stealing is @mikan03 , I just put it so people don't get confused anymore, but please don't make serious attacks on her, just report if you want!