

Gabrielle
she will be my new OC, hope you like it ^^PS: I am still practicing brown skin, any constructive criticism is welcome :3Jan 10, 2021
#oc
#draw
#blue
Comments
Beautiful artwork!
As far as critique goes, I think the nose looks super nice but then the lips look really flat! If your going for a more semi-realistic style, the rendering the lips could help! But if you want it to be more simple, then perhaps just simplifying the shading and doing more line art could help (you can do both line art and rendering if that’s the style your going for!
) I also noticed the orange with the blue in the shadows of the eyes and I think that’s a super nice touch!
hope that helped in some way!

As far as critique goes, I think the nose looks super nice but then the lips look really flat! If your going for a more semi-realistic style, the rendering the lips could help! But if you want it to be more simple, then perhaps just simplifying the shading and doing more line art could help (you can do both line art and rendering if that’s the style your going for!
) I also noticed the orange with the blue in the shadows of the eyes and I think that’s a super nice touch!
hope that helped in some way!
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