Caelan the cervitaur
Posting a single version of my previous post bc I like this composition better lmao, but also to ask for critique.Mainly looking for suggestions/critiques as far as the clothing design goes, but also the general character design.
Not so much when it comes to anatomy, though, bc I still need to learn that stuff and I already know it's not accurate (both for the human part and the animal part lol)
So yeah, if you feel anything could be added/removed as far as the general design goes let me know :3 thank yooou~Mar 17, 2024
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Comments
Such a great design, I love the ears and expression.
I want to know what's the purpose of the beige-yellow undergarment. It gives dimension and layers in the front, yet I'm puzzled about the (deer) back, extending further than the green garment but cutting sharply at an odd length. It could work, maybe like a young lad fad. What did you want to portray?
I think you got quite a nice grasp on the character, the belt is quite a nice touch with the bow gear
I want to know what's the purpose of the beige-yellow undergarment. It gives dimension and layers in the front, yet I'm puzzled about the (deer) back, extending further than the green garment but cutting sharply at an odd length. It could work, maybe like a young lad fad. What did you want to portray?
I think you got quite a nice grasp on the character, the belt is quite a nice touch with the bow gear
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•I love it! This character feels very nature-oriented and has a very earthy tone. I like the bags at the waist. Maybe you can add to the legs some sort of "ankle coverages?" On the front?
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•My only critique is that this is perfect and I love it 
also the satchel design is amazing and the ripples of the fabric 
and that playful expression glorious job
also the satchel design is amazing and the ripples of the fabric and that playful expression glorious job•
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