| I like to draw curves and lines on a page until it looks like a masterpiece (^)b
twenty five - twenty one fanart :)my favorite friend group <<33 this is them during their beach trip!!
OPEN FOR CRITIQUE!!
I'd like to know how I can improve in terms of lighting and colors^^Aug 12, 2022
OPEN FOR CRITIQUE!!
I'd like to know how I can improve in terms of lighting and colors^^Aug 12, 2022
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LOVELY! You definitely created a wonderful atmosphere there. The only criticism I could give is about the format itself- like it seems like your tried to make a picture that is like a printed photo in a photo album or? (at least that it seems so due to the edges and the cutting of the arms/hands) - and most mobile phones or generally talking camera have some kind of ratio like 16:9. 1:1 works too but it's just an intentional decision you can make. :3 (?)
Awww, I love the casting shadows 
and it's such a lovely illustration.
I think u could improve on hair rendering, cause there's no light there or at least not much difference between the shaded & illuminated parts. Otherwise I love it
and it's such a lovely illustration. I think u could improve on hair rendering, cause there's no light there or at least not much difference between the shaded & illuminated parts. Otherwise I love it
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The other thing you couldve careful about: where is the viewer supposed to look at - rn it's the hand in the air because of the contrast of value and it's even on a "free space" From there are two directions you could go to: either into the air towards the house or down to the face of the person - and then I am not sure where I should look at next :) leading the flow of the eye isn't easy but can improve an artwork a lot.. Especially if you actually have a whole scenery 
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LOVELY! You definitely created a wonderful atmosphere there. The only criticism I could give is about the format itself- like it seems like your tried to make a picture that is like a printed photo in a photo album or? (at least that it seems so due to the edges and the cutting of the arms/hands) - and most mobile phones or generally talking camera have some kind of ratio like 16:9. 1:1 works too but it's just an intentional decision you can make. :3 (?)•
I think it looks really good!! 
Like wow, I love the warm and friendly atmosphere it gives. ^^
Like wow, I love the warm and friendly atmosphere it gives. ^^•
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